1. I want to go visit as many countries in Europe is possible. Because I want to become an experienced traveler.

I want to go visit as many countries in Europe as possible because I want to become an experienced traveler.

2. When a student learns how to effectively communicate they will also gain self-confidence.

When students learn how to effectively communicate, they will also gain self-confidence.

When a student learns how to effectively communicate, he or she will also gain self-confidence.

3. Sammy hopes to go to college and he also hopes to get married.

Sammy hopes to go to college, and he also hopes to get married.

Sammy hopes to go to college and also hopes to get married.

Sammy hopes to go to college and to get married.

4. Before I leave for school I need to quickly check my messages.

Before I leave for school, I need to quickly check my messages.

5. The shopkeeper looked all over the store for the missing tooth, and manages to find it behind a shelf.

The shopkeeper looked all over the store for the missing tooth and managed to find it behind a shelf.

6. Martha enjoys shopping at thrift stores yet she gets frustrated when she can not find designer clothing.

Martha enjoys shopping at thrift stores, yet she gets frustrated when she can not find designer clothing.

7. Tori was late for the game so she had to sit on the sideline until the second quarter she is so angry at her coach.

Tori was late for the game, so she had to sit on the sideline until the second quarter. She was so angry at her coach.

8. Frank understands that will require a lot of hard work to become an American Ninja Warrior however when you are done, the rewards will be amazing.

Frank understands that it will require a lot of hard work to become an American Ninja Warrior; however, when he is done, the rewards will be amazing.

9. Mom noticed a deer in the woods driving down the street.

Driving down the street, Mom noticed a deer in the woods.

Mom noticed a deer in the woods while she was driving down the street.

10. He loaded the bottles and cans into his new car, which he planned to leave at the recycling center.

He loaded the bottles and cans, which he planned to leave at the recycling center, into his new car.

EC: When exiting the train, the station will be on your right.

When you exit the train, the station will be on your right.

The station will be on your right when you exit the train

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