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WWII: Mechanics Review

Complete Self-Assessment section one


Thesis Check/One-on-one help


  1. Finish Self-Assessment questions (pink) 
  2. Read “You Have No Friends” (WOW pages 309-313)


Final Draft of Essay III due byTH 4/28 

 Required Components:

  • ·         Final Draft (on top)
  • ·         Edited Rough Draft
  • ·         PRIII document (blue)
  • Self-Assessment document (pink) 
  • ·         Signed Film Analysis Worksheet
  • ·         Rubric (fill in your name and partner's name) (goldenrod)




Pages 68-69 in Handbook 

Coherent Paragraphs


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Mechanics Review


Page 248 in Handbook

Complete Exercise 25.1 (the first four sentences/up through "now he sells condominiums.")


Page 249:

#2, #4, #10





Look over drafts (3-4 pages/Works Cited)

Assign PR partners

Complete PRIII


Thesis Check--I'll be going around and checking your thesis statements/organization


Individual Help--take advantage! This essay if worth 20% of your grade.


Thesis Statement (included in introduction)

  • Identifies suitable evaluation criteria a documentary film (how are you assigning value to the film?
  • Develops a specific lens to evaluate the film—includes a balanced evaluation of the strengths and weaknesses.
  • Serves as a strong road map (enough for a 3-4 page essay, contains 3-4 main points)
  • Is well-written—parallel, clear, and mechanically sound



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