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Class 7 Winter 2016

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Writing Studios Visit

Writing Workshop I

Follow up: Rubric and Student Sample

Invention Workshop

 

  1. Review Writing Workshop I material for Quiz
  2. Bring complete draft of Essay I (typed in MLA format)  to class for PRI

 


 

Writing Workshop 1 Handout

 

Practice: Comma Rules

Unit 3 Test

 

 

 

 


 

Modifiers: pg. 257

 

A modifier is a word, phrase, or clause that describes, limits or qualifies another word or word group in a sentence. A modifier should be placed close to the word it modifies.

 

 

Identify Modifiers:

  • The bridge across the river swayed in the wind.

  • Walking along the shore, Mary watched the boats.

 

 

Examples of Misplaced Modifiers:

 

  • Venus de Milo is a statue created by a famous artist with no arms.

  • He approached the lion with fear in his heart.

 

Other examples:

Exercise 27.4

 

 

Dangling Modifier: a word or phrase that cannot logically modify any word in the sentence (page 262)

 

Example:

Using this drug, many undesirable side effects are experienced.

 

Fix this problem by adding a subject to the sentence.

 

 

 

Practice

 

Exercise 27.6 (page 263)

 

 

 

 

 

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